Tuesday, January 18, 2011

A troubled kid part 1

Before ab was a hero,  he was a troubled kid.  you are about to experience his dark side. ab was riding the bus nobody  knew that he put grenades on the wheels.  three two one boom!!!! the bus exploded. (this is the music that was playing in his head).  

the driver got up from the explosion with bad wounds on his body. he growled  and charged at ab.  Ab got chased around the city (Detroit). He was being chased around the park when a mother and her four year old daughter said "mommy there's a badly wounded bus driver chasing a boy" and then her mother said "Melanie, you're not supposed to see that!!"  

ab knew that the only way to get away was to go into the forest. he ran in and got chased around the forest with hikers just watching him. one was like "what the...?" he came to a cliff and he jumped off.  he swam to shore and went back to the city. he went to the city hall. he lied to random people that he had to take a cab home and his mom forgot to give him money but he was just trying to get money.  he saw a comcast van and a tv in it. he took a wireless tv and went behind a skate park (behind them there are alleys usually or abandoned places) he was watching "Cop Chase"when he saw a cop car on it heading down the street that he was on and started running.  then he turned into a werewolf. (werewolves can run up to 35 miles per hour) 

ab runs into the zoo and he jumps into the aardvark habitat he goes into the aardvark house and he discovers a secret compartment. (author's note- the author is interested in reading for the night so he is going to cut this short.) he crawls through the compartment and discovers a secret laboratory. he searches around for a while and then he sees a skeleton in front of him.  he finds a light switch in the dark and turns it on. it was a medical research skeleton. He hears noises coming down the tunnel which he accidentally left open. there were windows for some reason and he jumped out one.  the cops chased him. he went to a construction site. he climbed up the building when another cop climbed up too. the cop was about to get him when ab said "get away from me" he suddenly saw all of the streetlights flickering. he saw something glowing in the sky. he saw something coming towards him and then it fired a laser at the platform that he was standing on. he fell to the ground. they fired again, this time at the ground and ab saw the ground crumbling. To be continued...

(ab only talks once in this volume. he has a british accent and I have changed him from a vampire to a werewolf)

(Mom's ps- the author has become very adept at using spell check as well as demonstrating his own exemplary spelling skills.  The author just won his 2nd grade class Spelling Bee.  Later this week he competes against 3rd and 4th graders.)

1 comment:

  1. ha! I love the part where the mom says, "Melanie, you were not supposed to see that!"

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